The Mirror and the Veil

June 6, 2025 Updated June 7, 2025

The Mirror and the Veil
A poetic short story inspired by a ghazal of Saadi Shirazi

In a town kissed by rose winds and lit by the patience of moonlight, there lived a painter named Ramin. He was known not for grand murals or palace halls, but for the quiet sorcery in his miniatures. People said his brush could teach the stars how to shine. Yet despite the fame and fortune he might have claimed, Ramin painted only one subject—a face he had glimpsed once behind a silken veil, in the shrine courtyard, on a spring afternoon.

The girl had passed like a comet through his world. Her smile, brief as it was, unraveled something in him—a thread of silence that tugged and sang through every part of his being. She had not spoken. She had not needed to. In the open bloom of her presence, the world forgot its suffering for a moment. But as swiftly as she had appeared, she disappeared behind the lattice door of the shrine, leaving Ramin with only a memory, a torment, and the trembling echo of beauty.

Ramin never saw her again.

Still, he painted.

He painted mirrors that wept for being empty, eyes that searched alleys and gardens, and shadows longing to be touched. He painted angels, full moons, and creatures of myth—all shaped in the likeness of the girl behind the veil. And whenever anyone asked who she was, he would only smile and whisper, "Have you ever seen light try to explain the sun?"

Years passed, and his art grew stranger, more brilliant. In one painting, a heavenly maiden held a mirror, but the mirror reflected not her own face—only light. In another, a cypress tree bent over a sleeping traveler, its branches blooming with tears. He took one such work to a famed court painter and said, "This is the arc of her brow. This is the curve of her glance. Paint Jupiter if you must—but start here."

People called him mad. Others called him saint.

One night, worn by longing, Ramin stood in the shrine courtyard again. The spring wind had returned, bringing the scent of jasmine and something else—familiar, impossible. From behind the old veil of the lattice door, a voice, soft as twilight, spoke:

"Why have you painted me into every leaf, every star, every sorrow?"

He turned.

She stood there—older now, but more radiant than even his most impossible memory. Time had not diminished her; it had deepened her. Like a song rewritten by years but still sung in the same key of wonder.

"I had no choice," he said, eyes brimming. "My soul was conscripted the moment you smiled."

She stepped forward. The veil fluttered away. “You never asked me to stay.”

"I feared to disturb the order of things. That beauty such as yours was not meant for a mortal’s house.”

"But love is not always safe," she said. "It does not wait behind the curtain forever. And those who seek only peace never serve in the army of longing."

They stood in silence.

Then she reached up and touched his face.

And Ramin wept—not from sadness, nor from joy, but because the journey was over. He had traveled across the deserts of his heart, crossed every canvas, each brushstroke a step, every color a prayer.

And now, at last, he had found the source of the light he had spent a lifetime painting.

Moral:
To love truly is to suffer, to wait, to wander the battleground of desire—but sometimes, even the veiled ones step forward, and the mirror no longer fears its reflection.

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Obaideh Banihashemi
June 6, 2025 6:56 p.m.

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